Kinda boffed some words (like most of the smells a rat verse) cuz I sang and played the rhythm guitar together on one mic... couldn't edit them out. I'm moving back into FAWM mode now... getting away from the heavy production I think. I felt it was "good enough for now."
Roger Roll suggested I "shred" so um... I tried to shred.
Rock.
--
Chords so I'll remember them later:
Dm-Gdim7
Dm-Gdim7-F-Ddim7-Dm-A
F-C-A
Dm-Gdim7-Ddim7
One? two? ready? Go.
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing now?
Jimmy Doogan's on the street
But we all know he's a cheat
He's working on his angles
Dances like the man is made
He's got the ace of spades
Etched in ink down on his ankle
But he can't get a game
Because he made his name
We all call him "Weasel"
Woah-oh Jimmy Doogan
You better keep on moving
Because we won't even give you the time of day
(shredding)
Jimmy Doogan's got it bad
She's the best he's never had
We call her Cinderella
Kinda hides behind her mom
Jimmy thinks the girl's the bomb
And he'd die to be her fella
But you can bet she knows
Where Jim's love grows
She knows a rat when she can smell him
Hey Jimmy Doogan
You better keep on moving
Because you know she won't give you the time of day
Oooh
Hey Jimmy Doogan
You better keep on moving
Because she won't even give you the time of day
Hey boys now...
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing now?
Uh huh
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing?
What's Jimmy Doogan doing now?
Jimmy Doogan
You better keep on moving
Because we won't even give you the time of day
--
©2008, Charlie Cheney, BMI
Wow, I wonder what he is doing now?
Woah, Charlie.
Vocally you glide all over this song like Russians in the winter olympics. The guitars are honey. I love it when the boys come in!
U rock me!
I can hear hand claps
in the background in certain areas!
Carley Baer | 08-Feb-08
Good work!
Looks doubtful.
The chord structure and melody fit the "boffed" lyric so well. You should "boff" lyric more often. The "ace of spades etched in ink on his ankle" is a PERFECT characterization detail--showing without telling.
Such a great swing and groove to this one. A giant chicken's worth of catchy. Your work this FAWM so far is simply remarkable.
I zipped thru 5 Pages-Worth of Titles before I came across this Great Poetic and Interrogative Baby...& the Musical Hooks are STILL hangin'-onto my Addlepated Brain...Prolly for The Entire Evening!
"KUDOS" (Think Evabody knows a "Jimmy D"...You descrined him to A "T"~)....
Good Luck with this Winner, Amigo!
Your New Fan.
Stan
Um, "where folkies fear to shred" ?
The theme of Jeff Landgraf's "I'm Just a Folk Singer" ...
I loled at this - We all call him "Weasel". I think I might know this guy... or his cousin at least.
The harmony vox at the end were great!
Lots of fun, Charlie!
that jimmy doogan must hang out with jim croce's "don't mess.. jim"
shred on....
This is my new favourite Charlie song.
Jenna | 06-Feb-08
Loved loved loved the shredding. It reminded me of Santana actually. =)
Pigfarmer Jr | 06-Feb-08
I think your "shredding" was great, although i'm not sure that's the appropriate term. I saw the comment about the sparse guitar work being very good, but I would like to hear a bit more of chordal work (at times) during the verses. Maybe just cuz i liked the guitar work so much.
I could totally hear the vibe. I was impressed. From the title I didn't know what to expect, but I was pleasantly surprised.
Good Job.
Seriously, another great song. I can imagine it in a smoke filled bar in a gangster film set in 50's America. And I hope you're paying your backing group Musicians' Union rates.....
Susan Howe
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06-Feb-08
Wonderful. I laughed. Delight.
The guitar sounds great. I loved the bvs...
I gotta listen again...
You are the Charliest.
Is that a demo comment? It is. I apologize. :)
On the song side: I like the cadence and flow of the main phrase "Jimmy Doogan doing". And the end group vocal is wicked awesome. Nice. That will be sticking in my noggin for awhile.
And the shredding.
I hope you know a guy named Jimmy Doogan and you don't like him very much 'cause that'd make it more fun.
"Uh huh" - I am laughing out loud. The Cheneyettes are fantastic.
I love this.